Also, mun insertion mid-narrative is totally cool and not weird or dorky at all.

"Tir!" Kazuki exclaimed, turning around to see that he had faceplanted with the wall, and he sighed frustratedly. All of the commotion had nearly destroyed whatever arousal he had left, he was able to re-do his pants without too much trouble, and he quickly rinsed his hands before dashing to Tir's side.

"Tir, are you okay?" he asked as he knelt down beside him, "Man, I told you not to come in!"